This is really a greay piece of work. Great balance between the instruments and the arrangement realle made me use my desktop as a temporary drum-machine. Since i have to be critic bastard i dont care much for the kick. This song is near perfection.
I'd recommend putting some more effort into the lyric since i reacted to your very first words. You dont wake up in the morning in the middle of the day, thats like going to bed at night in the evening. Besides that i liked the arrangement of the song. More focus on the lyrics. Constructive enough buddy?
Thanks dizzlebeat. The lyrics were supposed to be like that, 'strap my shoes on my hands' lines that don't make much sense, all these lyrics where what makes it twisted.
But anyway thanks for liking my arrangement:)
dizzlebeat
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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 28, 2009
Yeah!
This is really a greay piece of work. Great balance between the instruments and the arrangement realle made me use my desktop as a temporary drum-machine. Since i have to be critic bastard i dont care much for the kick. This song is near perfection.
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars April 28, 2009
well
I'd recommend putting some more effort into the lyric since i reacted to your very first words. You dont wake up in the morning in the middle of the day, thats like going to bed at night in the evening. Besides that i liked the arrangement of the song. More focus on the lyrics. Constructive enough buddy?
Thanks dizzlebeat. The lyrics were supposed to be like that, 'strap my shoes on my hands' lines that don't make much sense, all these lyrics where what makes it twisted.
But anyway thanks for liking my arrangement:)
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 28, 2009
Heavy!
I dig this! Heavy stuff